Wednesday, December 1, 2010

Assignment 5 Critique Part 1

1. Scanned image: Most people didn't realize how I made this image. It is just a scanned image of my hand moving, but many people thought I had photographed my hand in water. So, it was suggested that I add bubbles in the photo to add more of an illusion.

2. Narrative: People liked the concept of these photos, but I need to change the contrast in the photos because they are too dark. Most of the group thought it would add to the photo if a change in time was shown. This could be represented in the lighting, a clock, or a change in the zoom/closeness to the subject.

3. Outdoor scene: Many people liked the image, and the cropping. The only change that was suggested for this image was to darken the flower with the burn tool in order to change some of the contrast. For a jumping off point on this image, someone noted that it would interesting to see the little figure in other spaces around my office (since this photo was taken in my office building).

4. Identity: This was a photo that does need some changes made. I need to work on changing the opacity of some of the layers in order to see the subject more clearly. But some people in the class could relate to the photo and liked the concept.

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